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09 June 2008 @ 08:19 pm
honey don't tell me again
why you think its fair.
people with plastic smiles
and cookie-cut bodies.
working for their money's


while the worth has sunk out and


families & friends & strangers
look on and pretend they don't


the effort is wasted.
everyone wants it.
even if they


why bother picking it up anyways?
cut the smoker of its cigarettes.

-personal response to the media.
16 May 2008 @ 06:02 pm
HARHAR. I got a subscription for deviantart today. Nao my journal there can look sexy.

Anyways, this is Finale with edits and a new name, that I think suits the story better. The ending was totally revamped, because the old one was soo bad.

Green = Edited Parts.

Word Count: 3760

Current Mood: boredbored
Current Music: Breaking Benjamin - So Cold
26 March 2008 @ 06:45 pm
The finished draft of Finale.
Helpful critique is awesome.
I used a lot of symbolism in this. See if you can spot them.

Word Count: 3434 (lol, awesome)

Current Mood: fullfull
19 March 2008 @ 07:33 pm
For. English.
Word Count: 710