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09 June 2008 @ 08:19 pm
honey don't tell me again
why you think its fair.
people with plastic smiles
and cookie-cut bodies.
working for their money's

worth.

while the worth has sunk out and

gotten
lost.

families & friends & strangers
look on and pretend they don't

notice.

the effort is wasted.
everyone wants it.
even if they

won't
admit
it.

why bother picking it up anyways?
cut the smoker of its cigarettes.

-personal response to the media.
 
 
16 May 2008 @ 06:02 pm
HARHAR. I got a subscription for deviantart today. Nao my journal there can look sexy.

Anyways, this is Finale with edits and a new name, that I think suits the story better. The ending was totally revamped, because the old one was soo bad.

Green = Edited Parts.

Word Count: 3760

 
 
Current Mood: boredbored
Current Music: Breaking Benjamin - So Cold
 
 
26 March 2008 @ 06:45 pm
The finished draft of Finale.
Helpful critique is awesome.
I used a lot of symbolism in this. See if you can spot them.

Word Count: 3434 (lol, awesome)


 
 
Current Mood: fullfull
 
 
19 March 2008 @ 07:33 pm
For. English.
Word Count: 710